Robin Hawke

The Note
October 7, 2011, 2:52 PM
Filed under: Three Sentence Stories

There was a note on the desk. Sonja felt the pinpricks of tears, the swale of feelings that heralded gushing emotions. Trembling fingers opened a grocery list.


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I love how you set up such drama and then it’s a grocery list. Sweet!

Comment by Liz Shaw

Woah, wow, this is just perfect. Such a moment captured! I think everyone has felt that misplaced anxiety only to be disappointed. Marvellous.

Comment by Louise Jaques

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