Robin Hawke

October 10, 2011, 3:29 PM
Filed under: Three Sentence Stories

Jared was pleasant looking, polite if an unexceptional conversationalist, and a considerate date. She could do worse. Invited inside his apartment, she curtailed the third date, summarily dismissed his prospects, when she noticed his dolls.


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I’m impressed by how much you say in so few words.

Comment by Madison Woods

These short shorts are teaching me how to do that. Each word has to pull more than its weight–I realized last night that I must make that my primary goal with any length of story. Yes, characters, dialogue, plot arcs are all important, but when each word is right, those other things fall into place. Thank you!

Comment by Robin Hawke

While I have been enjoying the others, I adore this one. Well done! 😀

Comment by Tracy Hutchinson

Thank you!

Comment by Robin Hawke

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