Robin Hawke

November 27, 2011, 3:24 PM
Filed under: Three Sentence Stories

The red planet twinkled before them, as if to guide them. Lola pointed to the heavens with her flashlight, fingers no less nonsensical in the dark. The light of a reflected sun traveled worlds—the light from her flashlight disappeared into space beyond the power lines.

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An incredible picture you’ve painted with only three sentences.

Comment by Madison Woods

You are such an amazing writer. You create such vivid images with only a few words.

Comment by Lisa Wields Words

Very good.xo

Comment by Tracy Hutchinson

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