Robin Hawke

December 12, 2011, 4:16 PM
Filed under: Three Sentence Stories

Lester opened the till. Automatic movements (drilled each night closing shop) selected ones, fives, tens. His robotic calmness aggravated the stick-up artist.

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That last line was a nice twist! Well done. 🙂

Comment by Kirsten

I wonder if we began calling robbers artists about the time we fell in love with Bonnie and Clyde…Thanks!

Comment by Robin Hawke

Ooh…What a great twist! The last line only leads readers on to imagine what happened next for themselves…So many possibilities. Perhaps the robber got annoyed that Lester was taking so long and shot him??? That’s what seems to come next for me…

Comment by Scriptor Obscura

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