Robin Hawke

January 13, 2012, 1:05 PM
Filed under: Three Sentence Stories

Somehow it happened that the car door shut while her foot dangled on the threshold. Her toes sucked inside; canvas and rubber caught the press. Too afraid to cry dismay, Ellie wiggled her toes all the way home.


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Comment by Indigo Spider

This one speaks volumes! Love it!

Comment by Kay Camden

Stimulates all the senses!

Comment by ClaireMcA

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